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Alan Wilson's avatar

What a moving poem! This helps give insight to a project I am working on for a DMin at Baylor's Truett Seminary over a theology on death and dying.

Liz Snell's avatar

Beautiful and vivid, restrained and yet so moving. The progression feels so right; I love how the ending comes back to the title (which in itself is a profound reflection on loss). Thank you for this gift out of grief.

Megan Willome's avatar

oooh, this one inspired a poem in reponse

Michael Dechane's avatar

Bob is one of the dearest humans on the planet to me. If this poem stirs you, I encourage you to consider his book In the Unwalled City. Many poems and a long, threaded essay that explore grief and grappling with coming back to life inside after losing a child.

https://slantbooks.org/books/in-the-unwalled-city/

Erin Mount's avatar

This is haunting and beautiful.

Laura Voisine's avatar

Oh, this makes my heart ache and hope at the same time. I keep rereading it.