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Sierra Westerholm's avatar

I actually LOVE this. I can't even fully tell you why... i think it gives just such a fresh perspective, but in a way that's so much better than the cliche "fresh perspective".

And I love how the line of each section ends, complete, but then to pick up seamlessly and yet independently in the next thought.

Great job!

Sarah Spradlin's avatar

Such a beautifully human retelling — I loved all the little details like the socks and log plops of the camels’ legs. Well done!

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