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Steven Searcy's avatar

"The winter cannot hold" carries nice resonance as a sort of inversion of Yeats' famously bleak line "The center cannot hold" (from "The Second Coming").

At first I didn't notice the "extra" unrhymed 15th line (line 9).

The meter is nicely done in this poem.

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Maggie Rico's avatar

Wow. Amazing!

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