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Sierra Westerholm's avatar

"But if I miss you, let me leave this inn,

Step out, kneel down, and find my home again."

So good.

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Therese's avatar

“ …who knows what rhyme

Will sound in time and so complete the line?”

Delightful meter and rhyme and content.

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Alisa DelCampo's avatar

Love this

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Reagan Dregge's avatar

I love reading this as Jesus, the "Infinite Poet Surprise"

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Zane Paxton's avatar

“You are the Infinite Poet. Surprise

Us, for as we gaze upward for a sign”

Wonderful line!

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Meltaz's avatar

Beautiful.

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E.V. McCall's avatar

Eloquent and lovely. I needed this poem today.

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KathyJoDr@mchsi.com's avatar

I love this Advent poem so much. The thought: You are the Infinite Poet. He is magical and He is peace. Thank you for this - it is a sweet prayer.

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