"And I can’t help it. I keep measuring the swallowtail wings of the world by them.
Lovely. I love the beekeeper section; mysterious and wise. “Runnel and Root” could be some kind of gardening or hiking store. “War-fracked” is an excellent description.
Oh my, that was a stunning poem.
I paused at these lines, "It is the sighted man who knows little,
who wields metaphors in awkward reverse."
And those last lines.... "a stone
the color of holy rebellion."
Wow.
I have been stunned by the pebbles of your thoughts -gently hurled
Lovely. I love the beekeeper section; mysterious and wise. “Runnel and Root” could be some kind of gardening or hiking store. “War-fracked” is an excellent description.
Oh my, that was a stunning poem.
I paused at these lines, "It is the sighted man who knows little,
who wields metaphors in awkward reverse."
And those last lines.... "a stone
the color of holy rebellion."
Wow.
I have been stunned by the pebbles of your thoughts -gently hurled