Very wonderful application of Leviticus 19 :9-10! Teacher Ray Vanderlaan explained that the corners and edges of one's field, the very fruit of our endeavors and our offerings back to God, can be narrow or wide. The choice is ours. Seems the edges of your field are very wide in this beautiful poem. Thank you.
Engaging work! I particularly appreciate the way that you employ symbols taken from our ordinary lives & imbue them with sacramental value in such an accessible way.
Very wonderful application of Leviticus 19 :9-10! Teacher Ray Vanderlaan explained that the corners and edges of one's field, the very fruit of our endeavors and our offerings back to God, can be narrow or wide. The choice is ours. Seems the edges of your field are very wide in this beautiful poem. Thank you.
Engaging work! I particularly appreciate the way that you employ symbols taken from our ordinary lives & imbue them with sacramental value in such an accessible way.
Such great images! And I like the use of alliteration and the rhymes in fun places.