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Wow, so well done. I've enjoyed all of these so much, but this is my favorite! So powerful and insightful and moving.

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Thank you, Sierra! The series continues on my own substack, if you're interested -- Monafolkspeak.

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Thank you! Yep, already hit subscribe lol!

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“…he was more of my Naomi.” Wow, loving this series!

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Thanks, Chuck! This is the last one that the Rabbit Room’s Poetry Substack will be sharing. But I’ve got 6 more on my Substack, Monafolkspeak, if you want to read those there, and I’ll begin sharing even more of them after Advent, too.

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Thanks, I will find your Substack!

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I feel Elisha's loneliness and a quavering in his heart. I feel the heat of the desolate place.

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A "heavy" cloak, for sure. A shield and glory for the nation still wavering between two opinions. Thank you.

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Brilliant!

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