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Timothy Jones's avatar

What a lovely poem--beautiful imagery, thoughtful insights, a calming rhythm.

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Jonathan King's avatar

Yes, what they said ☝🏾

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Liz Snell's avatar

Thanks everyone! I wrote this eleven years ago at Canadian L’Abri, where we weren’t allowed wifi and smartphones weren’t yet ubiquitous. I miss those days! Hiking trips in the wilderness still bring me back to that wonder and curiosity.

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Amy's avatar

This is utterly wonderful... a meditation on the value of silent wonder in a world overinformed. Thank you, Liz, for breathing that thought into words.

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Bandersnatch Books's avatar

"Hackled" is a great word

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Kevin Book-Satterlee's avatar

"Pipe-smoke crocheted..." - phenomenal!

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Mark Rico's avatar

The assonance and consonance here beautifully emphasize the setting's peace. Thank you for this eye-opener.

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Anna A. Friedrich's avatar

Gorgeous, thank you, Liz!

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Luis A. Estable's avatar

There was such a time, and all was fine with the world. Now many think we could not live without it. Well, we have done it for the most part of our history. Life was not less peasant or interesting then. But now, look how miserable many young people are. So we do not need the internet to be happy. It is a disaster for many people.

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Tyler Rogness's avatar

“We searched our separate lexicons,

fell silent in the lack.” Lovely and stilling work in this poem!

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Heather Cadenhead's avatar

I knew as soon as the title hit my inbox that I'd love this poem. All I can add is an "amen" to the other comments here.

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