“Its boundary has been set / and so has hers“
Mmm, I love this. < 3
So playful and delightful, with a dash of solemnity that comes with a liminal space.
So beautiful!!
I love the way this poem defamiliarises the ocean and takes us into the "overlap" with surprise
What an effervescent, festive, and visually stunning poem. Once I figured where we were I was running with you in the surf.
Ohhh.... what a perfect picture, these last lines,
"and where they overlap—
pure joy."
neat
Mmm, I love this. < 3
So playful and delightful, with a dash of solemnity that comes with a liminal space.
So beautiful!!
I love the way this poem defamiliarises the ocean and takes us into the "overlap" with surprise
What an effervescent, festive, and visually stunning poem. Once I figured where we were I was running with you in the surf.
Ohhh.... what a perfect picture, these last lines,
"and where they overlap—
pure joy."
neat