"It’s the sound of breaking strands"
Beautiful. The sounds!—This is a poem meant to be read aloud.
Oh, Lord. Come soon.
Phenomenal-took my breath away. Thank you for sharing.
Stunning work! 👏👏 The tension is so well done, and it prepares the heart well for the hopeful wait. Definitely one to be read alound, as others have said.
A winner in my books! Love the onomatopoeia and the imagery; visually and verbally it really stands out. Bring on the day of new creation!
Beautiful! Love the line about the pelvis
Beautiful!
Absolutely beautiful
i love that! good job!
powerful, thanks
Wow
I think my heart started beating a little faster as I read that.
This one is special.
I loved this! Sooo special thank you for sharing
Beautiful. The sounds!—This is a poem meant to be read aloud.
Oh, Lord. Come soon.
Phenomenal-took my breath away. Thank you for sharing.
Stunning work! 👏👏 The tension is so well done, and it prepares the heart well for the hopeful wait. Definitely one to be read alound, as others have said.
A winner in my books! Love the onomatopoeia and the imagery; visually and verbally it really stands out. Bring on the day of new creation!
Beautiful! Love the line about the pelvis
Beautiful!
Absolutely beautiful
i love that! good job!
powerful, thanks
Wow
I think my heart started beating a little faster as I read that.
This one is special.
I loved this! Sooo special thank you for sharing