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Caelie Jones's avatar

“...Pay attention then to the way your heart

Breathes a sigh of relief when the work

That was never yours anyway is lifted

From your tired hands. Pay attention,

When you clean up the mess, to the treasure

That the wreck unearthed, and give thanks

For your folly and God’s favor.”

That is my favorite part right there. Thank you, Andrew Peterson for this beautiful piece of poetry.

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Serene's avatar

My desire is to pay attention with more intention.

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Jason Leslie Rogers's avatar

"Pay attention to the eerie silence

When the air conditioner cycles off

And the only sound is the creak of the house. "

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Reading this was a stand-out poetry moment for me. I often notice moments like this, when I'm alone, the noise that has been playing in the background for so long that I had become accustomed to it suddenly drops away, and I'm confronted by a part of myself that was being drowned out. It's a frightening sort of relief.

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j j b r i n s k i's avatar

That last line is alright.

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Chrystal Senter's avatar

I have returned back to this so many times. It is beautifully haunting in all the best ways. Thank you for writing it, and also for entrusting us with it.

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Bailey Gillespie's avatar

Stunning 💛

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Travis Henderson's avatar

This is good because it’s true. Life has taught me that much.

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Jen Feay's avatar

Yes, paying attention and quieting the thoughts

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Charlotte Gunther's avatar

it is where i am these days -- the forward distance has shortened considerably and i want to pay attention

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Samantha Bryant's avatar

This spoke to me. Thank you.

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Matt Wheeler's avatar

Wendell Berry-esque.

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Jessica Smith Culver's avatar

This one is exceptional. Thank you.

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Sara Pimental's avatar

A word for the soul, sir! Thank you 🙏

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HLecair's avatar

This is beautiful... thank you!

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Kylie D Steel's avatar

Just want to say thank you to Andrew from all the way over here in nz. We first discovered his music, “sowers song” is an absolute favourite; then “Wingfeather Saga”, which I & my kids have savored multiple times & now profound poetry. Andrew, you’ve been an inspiration in & brought creative insight into so many areas of our families life! Thank you.

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Luke's avatar

Ooph.

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