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Kirk Jordan's avatar

I was prepared not to like this. But you cut through the cutsie. Pulled me and left us feeling real and observed. I love this.

Kate Gaston's avatar

Thank you, Kirk, I appreciate your honesty!

Julie's avatar

"I also know now that I want you to have my recliner, Jesus."

Expressed and placed like a wind that suddenly catches your kite and sends it soaring.

Kate Gaston's avatar

“…sends it soaring.” I love that! 🩷

Cynthia Ann Storrs's avatar

LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem!! Forwarded it to the women in my Bible study. We just read the old standby "My Heart; Christ's Home" and I thought it a wonderfully contemporary counterpart. Bravo!

Kate Gaston's avatar

Thank you for reading and sharing. 💕

Cynthia Ann Storrs's avatar

Really appreciate your work! I write poetry as well, and am in the area. Hoping we cross paths at North Wind or Hutchmoit!

Barbara Blazek's avatar

I love that you were sure He meant to visit someone else. Our pastor spent 40 minutes trying to convey this tender good news this morning. He did fine, too! Jesus’ compassion for each of us, beautifully expressed. Thank you.

Kate Gaston's avatar

Thank you, Barbara! 🩷

Caelie Jones's avatar

This reminds me of how we are now Christ’s temple. I am incapable of taking any of the precautions that the priests had to make in the Old Testament, and, as Andrew Peterson says, “my heart is black as coal. It’s been mined and there ain’t no gold. It’s so dark in there, but I don’t care.” Yet somehow Jesus does. He dwells in me despite of me.

Thank you for this poem. It’s a good start to my day.

Kate Gaston's avatar

Thank you for reading and commenting, Caelie.

Karen E Sandberg's avatar

As an agnostic and a UU, I find the surprise of this visit charming and heart-warming.

Kate Gaston's avatar

I’m glad you enjoyed it, Karen. 🩷

Jim Crotty's avatar

That's exactly how I would experience such an encounter and conversation. Perhaps slightly different furnishings and a over-friendly Italian Greyhound instead of cat hair, but still, the compassion and love unlike any other.

Kate Gaston's avatar

Thank you for reading, Jim!

Charlotte Gunther's avatar

what more to say than -- i love this!

Kate Gaston's avatar

Thanks, Charlotte! 💕

Juanita White's avatar

I love this poem! It's beautifully written, convicting and yet sharing a beautiful picture of Christ's love and compassion. Thank you!

Kate Gaston's avatar

Thanks for reading and commenting, Juanita! 💕

Kimberly Phinney's avatar

Absolutely lovely. He IS with us.

Kate Gaston's avatar

Thanks for reading, Kimberly! 🩷

Naomi Brown's avatar

Thank you. This poem really reached deep.

"I don't know much, but I do know platitudes don't swan dive."

Kate Gaston's avatar

Naomi, thank you for reading and commenting! ☺️

Christine Kindberg's avatar

Beautiful!! Thank you for sharing!

Kate Gaston's avatar

Thanks for reading Christine! 💕