This is an incredibly beautiful poem, a painting in verse. Your alliteration with "butterflies that flit
through the flowers" was so perfect and unforced, and it made me want to read on and pay even closer attention to the word pictures. Thank you for an invitation and an exhortation to *see* for ourselves.
I hear echoes of Eliot in your observations. "...the end of all our exploring will be to arrive where we began and to know the place for the first time." I hope you find an ever deepening sense of wonder in your search!
Beautiful. When I read it, music came along with it, sort of a hymn tune, but I don’t know which. If I can figure it out I’ll let you know! Thank you for sharing this
So beautiful! Congratulations on being featured! ❤️
Thank you!
This is an incredibly beautiful poem, a painting in verse. Your alliteration with "butterflies that flit
through the flowers" was so perfect and unforced, and it made me want to read on and pay even closer attention to the word pictures. Thank you for an invitation and an exhortation to *see* for ourselves.
Thank you! I'm so glad you received that invitation and hope you find much delight in the seeing. 😊
It has to be a personal interaction for the true power of nature’s beauty to write on our spirit. This poem is an encouragement to seek that.
I hear echoes of Eliot in your observations. "...the end of all our exploring will be to arrive where we began and to know the place for the first time." I hope you find an ever deepening sense of wonder in your search!
That last line. Boom!
packed with flavor and meaning.
Lovely words to bring me there. Thank you ❤️
What a lovely poem. Congratulations Elizabeth!!! :)
Thank you!
Beautiful. When I read it, music came along with it, sort of a hymn tune, but I don’t know which. If I can figure it out I’ll let you know! Thank you for sharing this
Oh, how delightful! I'd love to hear if you figure it out!
Very lovely pictures you create - I can see them all.
I'm so glad! You just walked home from work with me one day. 😁
I like this!
I'm so glad!
Very pleasant!
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Beautiful.
Thank you!