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What a lovely and deeply moving meditation on God’s manifold mercies in the blessed reality that we are known, loved, and treasured in His sight. I kept thinking about Psalm 139 while reading your work. In these challenging days, this lyrical call to embrace an eternal perspective is both much needed & greatly appreciated.

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Psalm 139 is one of my favorite psalms. ❤️ Thank you so much for your kind words.

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"walled us in with open seas" is a really nice juxtaposition.

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Thanks for reading so closely Janna! I really appreciate your attention to this line. 🙂

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This is truly stunning!

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Thank you, Kimberly! ❤️

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Of course! I’m secretly hoping you’ll submit to The Way Back to Ourselves Literary Journal. We are open now, and the theme is after Wendell Berry’s The Peace of Wild Things.

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I read about the theme and it sounds great! I recently just returned to Wendell Berry's sabbath poems and found them inspiring. I've got some ideas and hopefully I'll have something to send you later this month. 🙂

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That would be wonderful! Excited to see what you come up with.

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What a setup! That last sentence lands like a rushing wave.

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Thank you so much, Mark!

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This is beautiful. Love the ending.

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Thank you, Lee! 🙏🏽

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This is beautiful, Michael. Feels like an embrace, and I love that you invited us into your memory with your grandmother!

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Thank you so much, Sarah. 🙂

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beautiful.

"these flames,

frames truth which awes us more: You know our names." Incredible

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So glad you liked these lines, Claire. Thanks for reading! ❤️

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I love the mention of your Grandma. Shows the legacy of faith—like Timothy. Beautiful sonnet.

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I love your connection to Lois, Timothy’s Grandma. That is such a beautiful moment in Scripture—a few words that speak to entire lifetimes of faithfulness. ❤️ Thank you, Rosa.

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Wow. You know our names...my goodness what a great last line.

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yes that was my favorite of the poem too!!

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I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem, Jody. 🙂 Thank you for your kind words.

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Wow. Love this!

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This is lovely. Much like life itself, it’s gentle, but aflame with wonder.

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Thank you for your beautiful words of encouragement, Emmary. 🙏🏽

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Thank you, wonderful. I love that Grandma is in it; I had a dear aunt that used to pause in the same way over flowers. I just sent this to her daughter.

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I love hearing that your aunt lingered over flowers in the same way, Tracey. ❤️ What a quiet but splendid gift.

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