“Brief marker between everywhere and somewhere“
I loved the lines:
"Brief marker between
Everywhere and somewhere."
Love this poem, and I love Sarah’s poetic voice!
This is beautiful, especially these lines:
"Mere tent flap, bare threshold,
Brief marker between
Everywhere and somewhere:"
Remarkable images....
Wonderful. So much to ponder in the image of “door.”
So beautiful.
Your choice of the word “dust” stayed with me, and then I saw it again just now in George Herbert’s “Love (III)”—a poem so rich in the promise of the open door, the hospitable and welcoming Christ.
Thank you for this beautiful poem that warmed my heart and brought tears to my eyes. The comments expressed it perfectly...
This is really beautiful. The imagery connected me with the longing I have to belong and feel safe and known. Thank you for sharing!
Brief, but gets to the heart of it: dust/breath, life/death
"Mouth of a rabbit's hole" conjures so many images/associations, like a bizarre yawning complexity. A joy to read :)
I really love this. Simple beauty.
This puts into words something I’ve been wrestling with for a year. Beautiful in its simplicity & yearning.
This reminds me of lots of things. It took me to many places. Good job!
The rhyme, the line spacing, and the invocation of “you”---works together so well to make this short poem punch!
Love this one. That last stanza!
I loved the lines:
"Brief marker between
Everywhere and somewhere."
Love this poem, and I love Sarah’s poetic voice!
This is beautiful, especially these lines:
"Mere tent flap, bare threshold,
Brief marker between
Everywhere and somewhere:"
Remarkable images....
Wonderful. So much to ponder in the image of “door.”
So beautiful.
Your choice of the word “dust” stayed with me, and then I saw it again just now in George Herbert’s “Love (III)”—a poem so rich in the promise of the open door, the hospitable and welcoming Christ.
Thank you for this beautiful poem that warmed my heart and brought tears to my eyes. The comments expressed it perfectly...
This is really beautiful. The imagery connected me with the longing I have to belong and feel safe and known. Thank you for sharing!
Brief, but gets to the heart of it: dust/breath, life/death
"Mouth of a rabbit's hole" conjures so many images/associations, like a bizarre yawning complexity. A joy to read :)
I really love this. Simple beauty.
This puts into words something I’ve been wrestling with for a year. Beautiful in its simplicity & yearning.
This reminds me of lots of things. It took me to many places. Good job!
The rhyme, the line spacing, and the invocation of “you”---works together so well to make this short poem punch!
Love this one. That last stanza!