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So good!

Love Part 2. And these lines especially of Part 3 stood out: "Yours may be the aroma of death to the dying

and to me, but sipping is sweet

and the death a door. And you, yourself once passed

this way."

Can tell there's a lot of layers and room for deep-diving in this poem - great job!

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Thanks, Sierra!

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This is an astonishingly rich work. I’ve had the pleasure of reading it before, and with every reading I see more depths to plumb. Indeed, “…sipping is sweet / and the death a door.” Strong work, my friend!

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Thanks so much, Lee! Thankful to have had your help and the Habitation crew to round the rough edges on this one.

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Thanks, Rachel!

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