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Ray Smith's avatar

Oh my word, that's beautiful.

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Andrew Calis's avatar

What a kind thing to say -- thank you!

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Mark Bair's avatar

Beautiful. The images and structure with spacing helped me read slow and savor it. Your poem gave me a delightful experience.

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Tracey Taylor's avatar

Wonderful.

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Alex Jantz's avatar

Reminds me of "Sight" by Sleeping at Last. The last stanza is haunting.

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